I have a friend and her name is Amy.

 Amy is aged 13. She’s tall and has black hair. She wears a pair of glasses. Her favorite subject in school is English, and she speaks it very well! When she is free, she likes to swim with her parents. She usually goes swimming at weekends. She also enjoys playing table tennis and badminton. She dreams of traveling around the world someday, which sounds cool!

I like Amy because she’s friendly, kind and hard-working. I hope that Amy and I can be friends forever.

Teacher comments:

 A true friend will always be there when you need a shoulder to lean on. I am happy that you make lots of good friends. And you are doing wonderfully. For writing, it’s good to be correct and it’s also important to be creative. I am looking forward to reading more wonderful articles that are written by you.（Guided by Ms. Chen Yingying）