Shanghai is in the east of China. It is a beautiful city with many famous places. If you like sightseeing, you will love it!

In Shanghai, you will find a lot of places of interest such as the Shanghai Tower. The Shanghai Tower is 632 meters tall. You can see the whole Shanghai there. You can also go to the Bund, the Bund is where old Shanghai meets new Shanghai. If you walk along the Bund, you will see many old buildings. At night, these tall buildings light up the sky. And Nanjing Road is the most famous street in Shanghai.

Jinshan Area is famous for its wonderful beaches, it is near the East China Sea. Jinshanzui is the perfect place for a summer holiday, this is the place to go if you want to swim or eat some delicious fish. Fish in Jinshan Area is very nice!

Shanghai has something for everyone, so why not go to Shanghai now?

Author | 初一4班 黄垚峰

Comments: The student introduces Shanghai in a logical way. Sentence structures are various.(指导老师蔡晓奋)