What is National Day? It was in October 1^st that China was announced to be established. We have 7 days off to celebrate National Day. During this holiday, we can do many things. For example，some of the people go back to ther countryside to visit their family and friends.

       I do something interesting during this holiday. I went to Niubaba camp on October 2^nd. It was in Panyu District. There is an activity called Primitive Savage. I learn about primitive life. For example, drilling wood to make fire. This activity is difficult for me, because I had to turn the wood fast, otherwise I can’t make the fire. Not all the activities are difficult, I can also do some simple activities. For example, make an axe.

       I also went back to my countryside to experience rural life from October 3^rd to 5^th. I fed the chickens and pull ginger in the farmland. I realized the hardships of farmers.

       I also went surfing on October 7^th. The surfing hall called Extreme Surfing. I learned how to surf. It’s very interesting.

       I had a happy and substantial holiday. I learned a lot during this holiday.

教师评语：Andy really had a wonderful National Day holiday. In this article, Andy uses the past simple tense correctly. I am so proud of you.