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2022-10
Student Writing | My Family Life
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By Su, Yunqin from Class 1, Junior 9
There are five people in my family: my father, my mother, my sister Kelly and I. Our flat is big and beautiful, so I don’t feel crowded.
I usually do the housework with my family. There are not many family rules in our family, because they all believe in me. Although I sometimes argue with my mother, she never minds and is always patient with me.
At weekends, we always go out for dinner or go shopping. I enjoy spending time with my family. We like doing things together. There is a piano in my house. I often play the piano while they sing a song.
I love all my family very much. We have a close relationship and we support each other all the time.
Teacher’s comment: Well-organized! It’s wonderful to use proper conjunctions between sentences. I’m expecting greater progress from you in writing. Come on!
——Instructor: Chen, Yingying 指导教师: 陈莹莹
