初二（3）王安淇

   Guangzhou is situated in southern of China, by the sea. It’s alsowell-known as the Flower City. You can see colourful flowers bloomingeverywhere all year round.

   Guangzhou is a city which has a long history. It has many culturalbuildings, tradition and the food. If you have the chance to visit Guangzhou,the place you can’t miss is the Guangzhou CBD which is near the Pearl River.You can see both traditional and modern buildings there. At night, you can goon a ride in the Pearl River to view different kinds of lights shinningbrightly beside the river. Beijing Road is a place to go if you would like totry some Guangzhou dim sum and go shopping. At Beijing Road, you can not onlyhave authentic food but also delicious cuisine from all over the world. Manylovely souvenirs and special specialties can be found here.

  If youdon’t like the fast-paced lifestyle and prefer going on sightseeing andenjoying natural beauty to visiting crowded streets, Baiyun Mountain is aperfect place to visit. You can enjoy fresh air while climbing the mountain,you can also feel the gentle wind with a good smell of flowers. Birds aresinging everywhere. You can climb up to the top of the mountain and take a ridein the cable cars. It’s the best way to get bird’s-eye view of the whole city.

   Thereare so many places to visit, so much food to try and so many things to do thatyou just can’t imagine. I am really confirmed you will fall in love with thisastonishing city. Therefore, why not visit Guangzhou this year?

Comments: Ideas are communicated effectively and the writeris familiar with Guangzhou. From the passage, we know that Guangzhou is reallyan attractive city. Come and follow the writer’s step to enjoy the beauty ofthis city.(指导老师蔡晓奋)