English
中文版
2020-09
By Chloe张可悦 Class 3 Grade 5
Today was my little sister’s birthday. Wewent to our grandma’s home and made a big birthday cake for her. We wereexcited.
When we arrived at Grandma’s house, mylittle sister was very happy, because she wanted to eat the cake.
When my grandma said we can start makingthe cake, my mom prepared some sugar, milk and eggs. Then I mix the eggs andmilk together, and my mom put the sugar in it.
Whenthe cake was done, I thought, ‘That must miss something.’ So I went to get somemoney and bought four candles.
Finally, we asked my sister to make a wish,blow out the candles and cut the cake. She was very happy and she said, ‘I amso surprised!’ What an unforgettable day!
Review: The topic of this composition is “An unforgettable day”. The author describes the process of making cakeaccording to the order of activities. The students can start from observingtheir own things, using the sentences that they learned, describe the familiarthings around to practice writing. （指导老师：钟瑶Sherry）
